I found a big scary haunted house when I walked in there were flickering lights then there were ghost following me I was walking down the hall with the still following me I found out how to beat them with a weird contraption that sucked them in I found the destroyers lair I found a sword and exterminated him the end
Thursday, August 12, 2021
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Your sentence starter has me hooked Elijah but the words are zooming across the page which makes me not want to read as it distracts from the story.
ReplyDeleteCan you change the direction of the writing so it reads like the page of a book?.
Thank you.