woke up on an island it is a viking village there was Old rickety and wobbly roads made of wooden planks there were fish on a stick fire on a stick and
old wooden houses
I saw some fire it smelt smokey there was a little bit of blue fire and Snoring banging yelling battling Ships crashing at the shore twigs all around the place snapping its is very warm and windy there were Swords being sharpened it was pretty fishy cause their was alot of fish
I think it is a bad village
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Hello Elijah.
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Hello Elijah.
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