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Friday, May 7, 2021

little red riding hood

 Little red riding hood lives near the forest with her mum. By the other people in the Village


She has big blue eyes and a little bowtie.

She is fearless and brave for trying to get to the other side of the forest.

And has an red robe/hood.

She is also extremely nice

I think she will be very nice as a friend


2 comments:

  1. Hello Elijah.
    I used to love walking through the forest in Clinton but I would never walk in it by myself.
    What games would you and Red Riding Hood play if you were friends?.

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  2. Hi Elijah.
    Good work. I like it because you describe the Little Red Riding Hoodthat she was a nice friend. Next time add more detail into your writing.

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