Yesterday I was home alone playing Call of Duty with my friends. Online then mum came home and she gave me a present. I opened the
present and a dog came out. It only had three legs I was mad because it had three legs so I threw the dog on the ground. And it went on its back and it was barking and jumping on my leg. So I kicked the dog away and it was stuck.
On its back it saw a red ball underneath the cabinet. He got the ball and gave it to me. And I kicked it away into the box.
The dog got stuck in the box. He got out and took the ball and tried to give the ball to me. And it fell over two times while trying to come to me.
And then I liked the dog and then we went outside to play The End.
Nice work Elijah. You have some great ideas here. Next time it would be nice to hear a little bit more about how you changed your mind, as this is a big idea. I fixed the formatting from when you cut and paste it. Please check this in future. Ka Pai.
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ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you and the dog became friends.It must of been hard for the dog to feel not wanted.
We used to have a 3 legged dog.He was hit by a car and had to have a leg amputated.
Children used to walk past the gate and call him names.
Did you end up naming the dog?.
What colour is the dog?.
i like how you put so many paraghrahfs in.
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